Lauren Spencer:
I liked reading your essay Robots!!! Your blog post was well-organized and nice to read. Your essay provided a nice voice that was intelligent but also easy to read, if that makes sense. On this subject we shared a lot the same viewpoints. Computers are capable of performing impossible tasks humans could never do, but they will never be at the same conscious level has humans. You have great opinions and execute them very well, I always look forward to reading your essays.
Katie Kosturik:
I really like your blog Can Computers Outsmart Humans? Your essay had amazing voice and was very well structured. I really liked how you started the first paragraph by stating the views of Minksy and then stated your opinion on the subject. In the second paragraph, you provided the reader with the other side of the argument. I found your blog very interesting, can't wait to read more.
Tasha Cerimeli:
I enjoyed reading your Have We Been Outsmarted By Computers essay. Your paragraphs were well thought out and structured really well. Your essay was full of clear and strong opinions. Many of which I agree with. Machines are built, programmed, and used by us, so we must be the most advanced of the two. I also liked the way you started off your essay, with a little story about machines man-kind built taking over the world. It grabbed my attention and made me want to read more. I look forward to reading more of your essay.
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