Week 4 Blog Reviews

Lauren Spencer

Lauren I really enjoyed reading your Robotic Beings Rule the World post. You had some great views on the subject, but there were a few things missing from your post. There could have been more to the summary. If I did not read Wright's writing, I don't think I would have understood your post. At time your ideas were a bit disorganized, which mad it hard to read.

Your describtion of Frida's painting, Cristina My Sister, was really well written. I enjoyed reading this post it had amazing details. Your description of the painting was very clear, I could picture every thing your discussed perfectly in my head. I also liked reading your interpretation on the painting as well. You had a great understanding of this particular piece and it was joy to read. 

Tasha Cerimeli

Tasha, on your Can Computers think blog, I believe was some of your best work. Your summary on the reading was really well written. Your post was really well put together and it had great transitions. The flow of the essay, also made reading your work delightful. Your post also had a really nice voice to it as well. 

While describing Kahlo's My Grandparents, My Parents, and I, you also did an outstanding job. The details you provided for the artwork were so clear and amazing, you really helped me understand the different dynamics to the painting. The only thing that you didn't include in this post was your interpretation of the painting, I think I would have enjoyed hearing your thought on this particular piece. 

Katie Kosturik

Katie, in your Can Machines Think blog, I think you did a great job summarizing Wright's writing. If I had not read his essay I would have still understood his concepts and ideas, you explained his writing so well. I also found your opinions on the subject familiar to that of my own. I do not believe machines will be capable of thinking on the same level as humans. I also liked the way you backed up your opinions with facts from the reading, it made you're writing flow very well. 

In your description of Diego and Frida, I felt that you had a great understanding of what the painting represented. I know I would have had a difficult time describing the different aspects of the painting, and you illustrated it with ease. You gave good, clear details, and your interpretation of the artwork was very impressive. I really enjoyed reading your work this week.