Justin:
Post 10/5 was well thought-out and organized. I agree with a lot of what you wrote. The increased divorce rate and infidelity its hard to support the idea of monogamy as the social norm. I enjoyed reading your 10/7 post. You used the quotes from the reading very well and there was a nice flow to your essay as well. You had a lot of interesting points, especially at the end of your essay. You state that we have to fully understand homosexuality in order to fully understand its social and natural purposes. I thought that that particular statement was very cleaver and enlightening. The one thing I would change about your essay, is that there was a lot of facts, next time try to elaborate on those facts so that the audience gets an understanding of the material.
Armando:
I enjoyed reading your 10/5 post. You're writing was clear and your ideas were well thought-out. Post 10/7 was interesting to read, you really made your personal opinions known at the end. But, you really didn't share your thought on what the author wrote, you just sort of summarized the article. I would have really liked you to gone more in depth and shared your opinions on the authors findings. I know you didn't really agree with the Kluger ideas, and I think because your viewpoints were so different this post would have been amazing to read.
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