Hilary
I enjoyed reading all of your post you presented in your blog. You are a great writer and have a unique style of writing that allows you to get your ideas across in an understandable way. In a lot of your post you displayed a great voice and creative thoughts, which makes reading your posts delightful to read. The posts that I really enjoyed reading and I think would be great for your final essay were German Influence, Women in Music, and Animal Homosexuality.
I thought the way you wrote German Influence was very creative and had a great base for you to start up an essay. While reading this post I did not realize the amount of impact German culture has had on today's economy. You did a great job explaining the three major contributions, which were movies, foods, and customs.
I really like the way your wrote Women in Music. This post had a great voice and displayed some very compelling ideas. In this post you made a point that the music industry likes to go out of their way to justify the negative portrayal of women. In today's society if you are a women and do not accept this kind of music, your considered or labeled an outcast. I think you did a great job getting your points across to your audience. I particularly liked this post because you made so many good arguments, which kept me wanting to read more.
Animal Homosexuality, I think you be great for your final essay because it was well written and has such a great base to work from. You have a great voice, ideas, and a really strong source that comes from Jeffrey Kluger's "The Gay Side of Nature," and with a bit more research and think this post could be a brilliant final essay.
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