Tasha
I really enjoyed reading through your posts for this semester. You have a creative way of writing that I found highly entertaining. You have a great voice throughout your posts and I got of sense of your personality through you're writing. The posts that really stood out to me were Can't But Me Love, Corrupted Sounds a lot Like Corporation, and Do We Need Monogamous, Heterosexual Relationships.
I really liked that way you started off Can't Buy Me Love, it just immediately grabbed my attention. The introduction was creative and set the tone for the rest of the post. I completely agree with the statement you made in the beginning of your post, that materialism has made this country what it is today. I thought this post was very well put together and had some great ideas.
I enjoyed reading Corrupted Sounds A Lot Like Corporation because it was creative and entertaining. I like that you gave example of current musician in today's music to get your points across. You had a lot of strong ideas and I think with a bit more research this post would make a great final essay.
Do we need monogamous, heterosexual relationships? I think is probably one of your strongest posts. It was structured very well, and it was informative and entertaining all at the same time. You had great opinions throughout your post. I also agree with a lot of your statements, that the human being no longer need monogamous relationships to reproduce. But we do need marriage and monogamous relationships to establish strong relationships and finding love. I think this post would make a great final essay.
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