April:
In the beginning of your Control vs Freedom post, you stated that you did not know a lot about politics and government and with that being said, I think you did a pretty good job with this post, considering that you knew so little. You had some good ideas and with a bit more research this post has the potential to be great.
I really enjoyed reading your 11/4 post. You had a great opener in the beginning and it immediately grabbed my attention. The quotes that you used from the reading were placed well and enhanced you''re writing. I think you did a really good job with this post, keep up the great work.
Morgan:
I enjoyed your WWII and Finance post. You had some great ideas and they were executed well, throughout you''re writing. Your post was very well organized and flowed nicely to one idea to the next. The only thing I would add is a good attention getter in the beginning but other than that, I enjoyed reading this post. Great Job. Your Ultimate Freedom and Human Morality post was very well put together. Your ideas were clear and well written. I like that you added a personal experience to get your point across. I agree with you that many reside somewhere in the middle of libertarianism and complete governmental control, I know I certainly do.
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