April
I completely agree with you're Purchasing Happiness post. Society as a whole thrives off consumption and material goods. The quotes from the reading help back up your thoughts and supported your argument.
I really enjoyed your American Italians post. I liked how you connected with the audience by describing your families journey in America. Your introduction was great, I felt like I was right there with your Nona in the back of the store moving boxes. Your intro really grabbed my attention and made me want to read more. You also displaced an incredible voice, while reading I could imagine every word, great job this week.
Morgan
I liked your 10/28 post. Obviously you did a lot of research and it is displayed well through your post. Your introduction was structured really well, it had a lot of interesting facts. But I will say that it could use a good attention getter it was a but dull in the beginning. I like that you added a personal touch to the post, by describing your friends experience living in North Dakota.
I really enjoyed reading your Never Good Enough post, it was very interesting. You presented the positive and some negative effects to materialism. I also like that you went through the history and how materialism came to thrive in our society. I think you did a great job this week can't wait to read more.
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