Week 6 Blog Reviews

Justin

Directed Freewrite:

Your post was well written and had great voice. But, there are a few thing I would suggest. Your transitions from paragraph to paragraph were a bit disjointed, you leaped from one idea to the other. You gave the audience a lot of questions but no real answers. Other than that you had some great ideas and combined them well with the author's main points from the article.

Real Wild Men:

Training Day was a great example of a Real Wild Men. You described Denzel Washington's character in the film extremely well. Your thoughts were well organized and clear. You gave great examples from the film to support your ideas  and thoughts. From you're writing I could tell that you understood the movie and the reading well. 

Armando

Capitalism and Identity:

I really liked this post. It shows in you're writing that you really understood the article by John D'Emilio. You had great voice and smooth transitions throughout your essay which made it enjoyable to read. You conveyed your thoughts and idea's extremely well.

Real Wild Women/Wild Men:

Your thoughts in this post were clear which made it easy to read. You described the show, Jersey Shore, perfectly. Jersey Shore is the best worst show on television right now. The characters on that show are so likable, but for some reason I can't stop watching. The one thing that I would suggest is to give more specific examples from the show, to show how their Real Wild Women and Men.